tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141319040539099873.post6017321250828791176..comments2023-05-19T13:10:03.176+01:00Comments on Winter: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141319040539099873.post-51184072937469151582011-01-27T13:12:40.915+00:002011-01-27T13:12:40.915+00:00The idea of a dash sounds good. Thank you, Spiros!...The idea of a dash sounds good. Thank you, Spiros! <br />Or taking this confusing 's' out :) <br />I'll keep working on this one until I find the right way to show what I saw :)))Vidahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09445214590810247776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141319040539099873.post-23175146013115262212011-01-27T02:16:24.327+00:002011-01-27T02:16:24.327+00:00winter winds
red from the nandina's berries
sp...winter winds<br />red from the nandina's berries<br />spills over the leaves <br />Author Archive Vida <br />----------------<br />----------------<br />..i like it too and at first i also was<br />confused, thinking you were referring to the wind..perhaps<br />if you place a dash after 'winds'<br />or an ellipsis..i like..>>spiros<br />--------------------Spiros Zafirishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545803839184857732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141319040539099873.post-55299337840704763622011-01-25T13:23:47.149+00:002011-01-25T13:23:47.149+00:00Thank you, Diana!
I wanted to say that the red dy...Thank you, Diana!<br /><br />I wanted to say that the red dye spilled (not literally) from the berries, but apparently it didn't work out well :)<br />What about this,<br /><br />touched by the wind<br />the nandina flares-<br />red berries lost in red leaves ?Vidahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09445214590810247776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141319040539099873.post-20265183593851379482011-01-25T04:46:37.667+00:002011-01-25T04:46:37.667+00:00Very pretty. (One technical point: It would be &...Very pretty. (One technical point: It would be "spill", since "winds" is plural.)diana l.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12508598285292827626noreply@blogger.com