tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141319040539099873.post633514352281348307..comments2023-05-19T13:10:03.176+01:00Comments on Winter: The Four Seasons of Haikuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12478161106526373316noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141319040539099873.post-47716846223636286022010-01-31T23:21:20.494+00:002010-01-31T23:21:20.494+00:00Ditto!
Love the photo, and poem.
Maybe consider ...Ditto!<br /><br />Love the photo, and poem.<br /><br />Maybe consider losing "before us"?<br /><br />e.g.<br /><br /><i>Orion and me<br />the night clear and cold<br />dogs at our feet</i><br /><br />or<br /><br /><i>Orion and me<br />a night clear and cold<br />the dogs at our feet</i><br /><br />But definitely love it anyway! ;-)<br /><br />AlanArea 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5141319040539099873.post-36726844698004663732010-01-31T09:11:59.852+00:002010-01-31T09:11:59.852+00:00a delight - esp. 'dogs at our feet'a delight - esp. 'dogs at our feet'Rachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.com