Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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damp street clatters
the council bin lorry
decorated with tinsel

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I love this!

damp street clatters
the council bin lorry
decorated with tinsel


I do feel you don't need all that in the first line because the phrasal part is so strong and simple.

street clatter
the council bin lorry
decorated with tinsel


Alan

Jenn Jilks said...

Alan, you always have a perfect preen or massage for poetry!