I love this!damp street clattersthe council bin lorrydecorated with tinsel I do feel you don't need all that in the first line because the phrasal part is so strong and simple.street clatterthe council bin lorrydecorated with tinsel Alan
Alan, you always have a perfect preen or massage for poetry!
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I love this!
damp street clatters
the council bin lorry
decorated with tinsel
I do feel you don't need all that in the first line because the phrasal part is so strong and simple.
street clatter
the council bin lorry
decorated with tinsel
Alan
Alan, you always have a perfect preen or massage for poetry!
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