Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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my breath makes clouds
in the freezing bedroom
warm blankets

1 comment:

Alan Summers said...

What an enjoyable haiku!

my breath makes clouds
in the freezing bedroom
warm blankets


I think you should bring up those lovely warm blankets to the first line. ;-)

warm blankets
my breath makes clouds
in the bedroom


I don't think you need 'freezing' as hopefully everyone should realise it's cold if your breath is making clouds.

Sounds like you are making clouds above a warm blanket land, neat! ;-)

Alan