Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun


Skeleton trees reach
gnarled branches through falling snow.
Our joints ache.


Dennis Tomlinson said...

I like this one, especially the analogy between the skeleton trees and the aching joints. 'Tress' must be a typo for 'trees'. Maybe the word 'gnarled' could be omitted, since the rest of the haiku already implies a bleak impression of storm-battered trees.

Dymphna said...

Thanks for catching the typo, Dennis, and for the advice!


Cassiopeia Rises said...

Like you KU typo and all. Beautiful and oh so true image and words.