I like this one, especially the analogy between the skeleton trees and the aching joints. 'Tress' must be a typo for 'trees'. Maybe the word 'gnarled' could be omitted, since the rest of the haiku already implies a bleak impression of storm-battered trees.
Thanks for catching the typo, Dennis, and for the advice! ~Gemma
Like you KU typo and all. Beautiful and oh so true image and words.Melanie
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