Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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Skeleton trees reach
gnarled branches through falling snow.
Our joints ache.

3 comments:

Dennis Tomlinson said...

I like this one, especially the analogy between the skeleton trees and the aching joints. 'Tress' must be a typo for 'trees'. Maybe the word 'gnarled' could be omitted, since the rest of the haiku already implies a bleak impression of storm-battered trees.

Dymphna said...

Thanks for catching the typo, Dennis, and for the advice!

~Gemma

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Like you KU typo and all. Beautiful and oh so true image and words.

Melanie