Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun


streets glaze with ice
tonight -
a moon mirror


diana l. said...
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diana l. said...

A similar comment to yours from my last piece - the image is beautiful, but I don't think you need "tonight". Also, my mind keeps shifting "glaze" to "glazed".

And where's the classic accompanying David photo? (perhaps none did it justice?)

John McDonald said...

excellent david love it

Kelly M. said...

beautiful, David --