Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

____________________________
.
shorter
than the others
the shadow
in twilight
of a snowman
.

4 comments:

David said...

i like this one a lot Alan.

Alan Summers said...

Thanks David!

I should try to write more tanka. ;-)

Alan

Leatherdykeuk said...

lovely!

diana l. said...

Oh what fun! And yes, you should.