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Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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cicada's songs of love
stilled by winters freeze
buried deep, they wait
the earth warms

2 comments:

diana l. said...

Less is more, for sure.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

I reworked it and less is best. Much thanks Diana.

Melanie