Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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Love song

dining alone
the piped-in music plays
our love song

Notes from the Gean:
A Journal of Japanese Short Forms
Vol. 1, Issue 3, December 2009

6 comments:

Carlos Gesmundo said...

Brings out good memories. Thanks, Vic.

Spiros Zafiris said...

..stark, strong; takes you there..

..thanks..


spiros
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nora said...

Very lovely, Vic. Poignant.

diana l. said...

Yes. This one is very visceral.

Vic Gendrano said...

Thank you very much Carlos, Spiros, Nora, and Diana for your kind and supportive words. Such comments encourage me more to do better and improve some more in my craft. Be sure to check my blog whenever you can as the uploads there will be part of my second book of poems.

http://haikuharvest.blogspot.com/

Happy New Year everybone!

Wandering spirit said...

sadly beautiful, Vic..