Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun


catkins at the boating pond
a puddling of mallards
dipping for food


David said...

Rachel this is great. I love 'puddling of mallards' - the use of strong consonants makes this work so well.

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Leatherdykeuk said...

Thank you David!