Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun


mallards courting
my snowman suffers
a second death


Alan Summers said...

I really like this.

Is it the action of the mallards that is physically reducing the snowman?

There's a terrific sense of humour which is lovely to see.

Alan’s Area 17 blog

Crafty Green Poet said...

I love this one, very vivid and entertaining!

Leatherdykeuk said...

Thank you both most kindly!

Kelly M. said...

or perhaps the snowman is jealous?! wonderful haiku, Rachel!

diana l. said...

I, too, am trying hard to visualize this. Do tell! (It's wonderful, by the way.)