Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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Their Approach

heartache's trombone
blares its glacial outrage
through nondescript umbrage
welcome not
surrender's snowflakes near
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..circa 2010..Copyright 2010 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Ram; reaching into the poet's heart
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4 comments:

diana l. said...

I really like that opening line.

Spiros Zafiris said...

..thanks diana l.>>..

..i do have a tendency towards
the abstract.and then i have to
run to my guiding spirit for
explanation..He did tell me that
"surrender's snowflakes" are
the tears of one's heartache..all
the same, i may rewrite this one,
to make it a touch more understandable..

..spiros
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Cassiopeia Rises said...

I love your words and images. You could rewrite this. It might be more powerful with less words.


Melanie

Spiros Zafiris said...

..thanks for your comment,Melanie

..always something to consider..indeed

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spiros
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