Absolutely love those first two lines!Maybe it needs a dash or ellipsis after "lived" though?I could be wrong. ;-)I'll definitely be revisting this one as it does have great resonance!Alan
Thanks, Alan. Following your advice, I have added a dash after 'lived': I glanced at the run-down house, now totally deserted since the occupant died - and the eerie impression gave me a start!
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