Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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late morning coffee
...glimpsing an opossum
on her way home

2 comments:

Gemma said...

I like the way you put in the change at the end. I don't always do that as well as I'd like.

Vida said...

Gemma, thank you so much for your encouragement! It means a lot to me!
I cannot comment on the form of the poems because I am not an expert, but I think that you have a real gift for finding those "aha" moments! And the rest should be practice, right :)))