Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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rain beats down
on a sodium yellow street
midnight tyre hiss

3 comments:

Kelly Marszycki said...

great imagery, Rachel!

Alan Summers said...

Those first two lines are amazing!

I think if you got rid of the inversion in the last line it would make it as a whole.

e.g.

rain beats down
on a sodium yellow street
midnight hiss of tyres



Alan
Alan’s Area 17 blog
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Möme said...

I love the 'sodium yellow street'.