Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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spring-like morning -
the hedge
sings for all its worth

6 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Wow!

By the way, you don't need spring-like if you don't want it. It's now Spring in Ireland, which is only next door to you. ;-)

Alan

p.s.

I'd post a different version of this in the Spring section:

spring morning -
the hedge
sings for all its worth


Or another word or kigo for Spring in the first line.

It's that last two lines which are absolutely magical and memorable.

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Vida said...

I love this!

diana l. said...

Amen on those last two lines!

Spiros Zafiris said...

..indeed-di-doo..!

Möme said...

John has such talent for fun, ingenious poetry.

Kelly Marszycki said...

wonderful!