Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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magnolia buds
swollen, soft --
tiny dancers poised
for the first movement

6 comments:

David said...
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jem said...

Nice sense of anticipation - of seasons set to shift.

Vida said...

I really like this one, Kelly!

Beatrice V said...

Wow! fabulous, Kelly

Spiros Zafiris said...

..i must agree..quite
terrific..>spiros

David said...

Hi Kelly

I deleted my original comment after I read your encouraging comment on my haiku.

I can't remember everything I wrote except this

magnolia
soft swollen buds
poised

There now I've written it and just about to post it.

Good wishes from David