I like this John
Great work, John.I'm impressed with the physicality of the poem, the Language School style,and moreover the "cutting" associates well with biting cold of winter!Fine work.
Excellent work, John.I appreciate the sheer physicality of the images, the "cutting," a word carefully chosen with associations to the biting of winter cold.
This is strong work, John.Very physical. The choice of the word "cutting" is crucial, as it has powerful associations with the biting cold of winter.Great work!
Very strong work, John.The word "cutting" is perfect; it lends power to the image and the tearing coldness of the season!Jack Galmitz
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