Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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advent chocolate
the chill of early morning
on bare arms and legs





Edited after Alan's advice

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I like it!

the chill of morning
claws at bare arms and legs
advent chocolate


You could also make this a 5/7/5 haiku and bring the kigo to the first line.

e.g.

advent chocolate
the chill of early morning
on bare arms and legs


all my best,

Alan
The Super Renga
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Leatherdykeuk said...

Lovely edit, Alan, thank you.