Today is also ending-- at the bottom of the snowstorm the gigantic sun ---Arō ____________________________
slowly her perfect pristine body moved lethargically, wrapped loosely her luscious form molded in pale sheets lovely in all her whiteness a match for the softly falling snow
2 comments:
I really like the last two lines here. To me, they seem strong enough to stand alone, less being more.
Thanks diana. I think you are right. Thanks for reading my work.
love, Melanie
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