Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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white muffled mountain
I remember your bird songs
now whispers its call

4 comments:

Alan Summers said...

This is incredibly beautiful...

white muffled mountain
(I remember your bird songs)
now whispers its call


I don't feel you need the brackets, and maybe reduce the last line?

white muffled mountain
I remember your bird songs
now whispers


all my best,

Alan

diana l. said...

Thank you, Alan. It think I will drop the parentheses. But I do want to stick with call, given the reference to the bird song.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

This is lovely. The imagery is beautiful.


Melanie

diana l. said...

Thank you, Melanie.