Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun



Milkweed seeds have flown
Leaving the dry empty husks
And long dark shadows.


diana l. said...

This is really nice, Sarvananda. (What do you think about dropping the word "the" in the second line? I'm not sure you need it.)

Leatherdykeuk said...

lively image. I always feel sorry for them.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Beautiful image but I agree you do not need "the" in the second line. It is powerful enough and less is best. Great work.