This is really nice, Sarvananda. (What do you think about dropping the word "the" in the second line? I'm not sure you need it.)
lively image. I always feel sorry for them.
Beautiful image but I agree you do not need "the" in the second line. It is powerful enough and less is best. Great work.Melanie
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This is really nice, Sarvananda. (What do you think about dropping the word "the" in the second line? I'm not sure you need it.)
lively image. I always feel sorry for them.
Beautiful image but I agree you do not need "the" in the second line. It is powerful enough and less is best. Great work.
Melanie
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