i wonder'startled by the muffled sound of church bells echoing off the moon'best wishesDavid
Wow, it isn't really what I meant, but it is fantastic, David. The bell ringing wans't muffled -very much the contrary, it was the contrasting silence afterwards, AND an enormous full moon!
I just love the second and third lines, Beatrice.
What a delight this is. It makes me miss living near a church.
Sorry for my take over bid of your tanka Beatrice. I was transported by your powerful images of 'night,' 'silence' 'full moon' and 'bells'.What a great combination!Thanks and sorry againDavid
Wow wow wow. This is great. I just love it.Melanie
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