Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun


raindrops bead
on the surface of parked cars
the postman whistles


Alan Summers said...

I love those first two lines.

Maybe you should add a definite or indefinite article on the last line?

Just love this:

"raindrops bead
on the surface of parked cars"


Leatherdykeuk said...

Thank you Alan.

You're quite right. It sounds like the postman was a kettle.

Alan Summers said...

We have great posties in Bradford on Avon and can have a quick chat and a joke. ;-)