I love those first two lines.Maybe you should add a definite or indefinite article on the last line?Just love this: "raindrops beadon the surface of parked cars"Alan
Thank you Alan.You're quite right. It sounds like the postman was a kettle.
We have great posties in Bradford on Avon and can have a quick chat and a joke. ;-)Alan
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I love those first two lines.
Maybe you should add a definite or indefinite article on the last line?
Just love this:
"raindrops bead
on the surface of parked cars"
Alan
Thank you Alan.
You're quite right. It sounds like the postman was a kettle.
We have great posties in Bradford on Avon and can have a quick chat and a joke. ;-)
Alan
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