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Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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visibility reduced
to flakes of whirling snow
blue tits fighting

2 comments:

diana l. said...

How about "to whirling flakes" as a second line instead of spelling it out?

Rachel Green said...

Good call , Diana, thank you.