Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun


a brightness of clouds
next-door's snowman
becomes a rabbit


Alan Summers said...

Love it! Is this the New Year's Day snowman?

Just one niggle, why is "next-door's" hypernated?


Beatrice V said...

I like this too!

Alan Summers said...

Yep, this is a keeper, just remove the hyphen.

It's not only a darned good haiku on the surface, but has depth, no pun intended, and sabi-wabi.

One that stands out Rachel! ;-)

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