Love it! Is this the New Year's Day snowman?Just one niggle, why is "next-door's" hypernated?Alan
I like this too!
Yep, this is a keeper, just remove the hyphen.It's not only a darned good haiku on the surface, but has depth, no pun intended, and sabi-wabi.One that stands out Rachel! ;-)AlanArea 17 blog.
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Love it! Is this the New Year's Day snowman?
Just one niggle, why is "next-door's" hypernated?
Alan
I like this too!
Yep, this is a keeper, just remove the hyphen.
It's not only a darned good haiku on the surface, but has depth, no pun intended, and sabi-wabi.
One that stands out Rachel! ;-)
Alan
Area 17 blog
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