Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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he asks Santa
for a ticket to Mars
and a suitcase

Not a haiku but a renga verse

5 comments:

Chef E said...

I like this...

Alan Summers said...

Thanks!

I do a stint as Santa in a big Mall in England which is great background for my children's novel too. ;-)

Alan
Alan’s Area 17 blog
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Beatrice V said...

Great renga verse, can't forget the session we had at that workshop last year, it was such fun and resulted in the most wonderfully quirky renga!

Alan Summers said...

Hi Beatrice,

Well we might well do a renga at the Purely Haiku course. ;-)

Alan

Kristin Riggs said...

Brilliant! I love this. :)