Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun



he asks Santa
for a ticket to Mars
and a suitcase

Not a haiku but a renga verse


Chef E said...

I like this...

Area 17 said...


I do a stint as Santa in a big Mall in England which is great background for my children's novel too. ;-)

Alan’s Area 17 blog

Beatrice V said...

Great renga verse, can't forget the session we had at that workshop last year, it was such fun and resulted in the most wonderfully quirky renga!

Area 17 said...

Hi Beatrice,

Well we might well do a renga at the Purely Haiku course. ;-)


Kristin Riggs said...

Brilliant! I love this. :)