Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun


mist-laden air
from a roof top aerial
a rook calls

1 comment:

Area 17 said...

Love that first line! ;-)

This reminds me of my own aerial haiku:

mist haze-
a crow cleans its beak
on a rooftop aerial

Publications credits:
Azami 38 (1996); First Australian Online Anthology (1999); Cornell University, Mann Library, U.S.A. "Daily Haiku" poet (October 2001); The Haiku Calendar 2003 (Snapshot Press); Wing Beats: British Birds in Haiku (Snapshot Press, 2008)

Award credits:
Runner-up, The Haiku Calendar Competition 2002 (Snapshot Press)

all my best,
Alan’s Area 17 blog