a delight - esp. 'dogs at our feet'
Ditto!Love the photo, and poem.Maybe consider losing "before us"?e.g.Orion and methe night clear and colddogs at our feetorOrion and mea night clear and coldthe dogs at our feetBut definitely love it anyway! ;-)Alan
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a delight - esp. 'dogs at our feet'
Ditto!
Love the photo, and poem.
Maybe consider losing "before us"?
e.g.
Orion and me
the night clear and cold
dogs at our feet
or
Orion and me
a night clear and cold
the dogs at our feet
But definitely love it anyway! ;-)
Alan
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