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Today is also ending--
at the bottom of the snowstorm
the gigantic sun

---Arō

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Orion and me
the night clear and cold before us
dogs at our feet

Photo Orion by Danny McL

2 comments:

Rachel Green said...

a delight - esp. 'dogs at our feet'

Area 17 said...

Ditto!

Love the photo, and poem.

Maybe consider losing "before us"?

e.g.

Orion and me
the night clear and cold
dogs at our feet


or

Orion and me
a night clear and cold
the dogs at our feet


But definitely love it anyway! ;-)

Alan